Friday, May 27, 2011

Unbirthed, Unhinged, Undone, Unafraid (2nd draft)

Unbirthed. The first creation.
Born of the darkness within
Once a Princess--untainted--without sin

The Original disappeared from time and space
Leaving a spunky little rebel in her place
Different except for their shared face

She would grow through darkness, never a care towards "right" or "wrong"
All the while becoming strong
Until suddenly everything that once was had gone

Reality crumbled with a simple phrase
Her eyes clouded over with a greenish haze
She began to attack with heartbroken craze

Her Darkness saved her with a passionate kiss
She vowed he would be the one thing she'd miss
He told her he loved her, and to always know this:

Though the worlds may part
Though he would depart
She would always and forever hold his heart

Time would pass, she stayed the same
Ever searching, ever insane
Looking for the heart she did claim

No--it wasn't him at all
'Twas a fake, who did have the gall
To hold the face of he who caught her fall

She knew at once this was the key
This strange creature that resembled he
Who heard her silent plea

Together they set out
Ready for adventure
And slowly did she wait out
Her Darkness, her protector



Unhinged. The world fell apart.
The witch's magic ate at her heart
She couldn't break free; the Wicked Man was too smart

Memories that were not her own
Real as the experiences she had once known
The Wicked Man smirked at her from his throne

"Friend" he claimed
Her spirit in chains
He even made her forget her name

Treated like a slave
Digging her own grave
Waiting for the earth around her to cave

Forced to obey
She finally got her way
After seeing to his death she ran away



Undone. Again she was lost
Working under this strange new boss
Her sole mission to protect the Light--whatever the cost

He became her friend
Though perhaps more did he intend
True to her mission she protected to the end

Again memories alter
The mission never to falter
Trapped within a code and left for slaughter

With a sudden discovery her world tumbled down
Without warning she fell through the ground
Nothing  but darkness all around

Bonds UNDONE
Mind UNHINGED
The UNBIRTHED's game was about to begin



Unafraid she played her game
Her battle cry was his name
The perminant smirk maniacally insane

Like a song on repeat
She fought to its beat
Parrying and lunging, light on her feet

Whips lashed at her will
Glowing metal hungry for a kill
Giving their master a euphoric thrill

Like a wild animal she stalked her prey
Never again forced to obey 
Those foolish mortals she slay

Darkness consumed her
Movements a blur
Destroying all that dared stir

There was no Darkness to bring her back
No ray of Light to keep her on track
She fought until her world went black

UNAFRAID of death
Bonds UNDONE
Mind UNHINGED
UNBIRTHED forever
Until her last breath


Okay, so I originally started this thing a few months ago. Basically, around the time I was trying to reinvent ATJ. I took the basic idea of the new ATJ and made the first six stanzas of the last post. I picked it up yesterday and just sort of went from there.

If you can't tell, it's basically a story about a girl who goes crazy. It was intentionally written to be vague, but things that can be taken as Kingdom Hearts plotline are marked in ().
She was never really all that there to begin with, considering she was a flawed first experiment, but she looses it when she starts to fight in this big epic war. She is brought back to reality by 'her Darkness' (who I very, VERY vaguely based off Venitas from KHBBS) and basically vows to bring him back. 
She meets up with 'the Fake' (KHI Sora) and realizes that the two are connected. She tags along with the end of 'the Fake's' journey, hoping 'her Darkness' will show up, but is captured by 'The Wicked Man' (who, for those of you who have read and understood ATJ, is basically Ikxe) who tries to wipe her memory and make her his own creation. 
She holds onto the basic need to find 'her Darkness' but becomes 'The Wicked Man's' puppet. Eventually she  finds a way out and kills him, only to come across 'her new boss' (basically, ATJ-wise, this is where she becomes part of the Organization). Her sole mission is to protect 'the Light' (AKA Roxas) and because of that she follows him when he leaves the group. 
They both become trapped in a fake world (in the fake Twilight Town) but something causes her memories to trigger and suddenly she remembers everything of her real life. 
She then proceeds to go completely and utterly insane, killing everyone, and then dies in battle.

I didn't really want a happy ending at all, especially since I was listening to angsty, Electric-Guitar-Heavy music that more or less boarders Metal--mainly, Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace. I sort of wanted to do a much darker story than what I usually do, since that's kinda what Aanyx's story started out as--a way to relieve anger. That's why (again, for those of you that know) the first draft of ATJ had so many strings of curses in it.
But I wanted this particular piece to not just  be a fanfic; I feel like Kingdom Hearts has been ruling my writing a lot. I haven't really done anything original in a while, so I thought this might be a starting point.
I'll probably edit it again, since there are still some parts I'm not too happy with, but for now I'll leave it as is.


S'yeah...

This has been a certified drabble courtesy of Sincerely Doubtful Productions

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